- music was a bit repetitive
- titles could've been better/too long (could've been over the clips)
- Didn't understand story-line
- too much dialogue
- unclear plot
- Camera work could've been more sturdy
Positives:
- good use of sound effects
- use of dreams worked well
- Really good flash back effects
- Good amount of the shots and variety
- Text really good
- effective editing
- music suits the genre
- good variety of locations
- music built tension
- Meets conventions of thriller - makes the audience ask question
- good story-line and transitions
- The black and white effects were good