comments on the video

Credits are all at the very beginning, and continue for quite a while. If something was going on in the background they would become more effective.
Music was good at the beginning as it set the tone of the scene. However, more music could be added later during the actual film.
Good use of camera shots, matches the thriller convention.
Props were appropriately used, such as the syringe, although it was a bit unclear as to whether the girl being dreamed about has killed herself, or has been killed.
Good effects when the shots flick to black and white, such as the transitions. And slight blur on the screen.