Friday, 4 February 2011

Script for our thriller 'Immersed Angel'

Detective is asleep in his bed, beginning to show signs of having a dream and his eyes begin to roll. 
Panning shot of detectives belongings in the bedroom, leading to an extreme close up of his face.


Goes into the dream, shows the girl in an orchard holding a bunch of flowers, she is dripping wet, and looks into the camera as if its a pair of eyes. 
Shown by a flash of white light, then dream is in black and white. Establishing shot of the girl in the orchard.


The detectives phone wake him up suddenly.
Extreme close-up of the detectives eyes wide open.


The detective reaches out for his phone, as it is still ringing.
A close-up of his hand picking up the phone.


The other detective is introduced by the two of them having a phone conversation about the crime they have to investigate. Detective 2- ' if you could getup and kindly help me with this situation. get ready now, we have a murder case on our hands.' detective hangs up.
A split screen of both detectives; one fully dressed drinking coffee, the other still in bed.


The first detective gets out of bed and begins to throw his clothes on.
Mid shot of detective


The less experienced detective drives up to the house where he meets his colleague. Detective 2- 'iv'e been informed that the victims a 17 year old girls, and looks like shes been in this state for under 24 hours' Detective 1- ' Okay lets go check it out.'
Establishing shot of the house which cuts to a long shot of the car. An over the shoulder shot is used when the two detectives meet. 


Both detectives walk through the front door and up the stairs to the bathroom.
Point of view shot is used. 


The detectives enter the bathroom where syringes are on the floor and a girl is in the bath.
A panning shot of the bathroom floor which then scans the girl in the bath, starting at her feet, leading to her head. A close-up of the girls face.


Flash back of the detective's dream showing that the girl in his dream is the same girl that has been murdered. 
Long shot of the girl in the orchard, showing flowers on the floor. flash of white light is used to show it's a flash back, then the image is black and white. 


The detective realises this.
Close-up of the detectives face and his reaction. 

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