Planning for our thriller pitch!

for our film, we are going to call it The Immersed Angel, because immersed means being forced under water, which is based around our narrative. Also, we used Angel as she becomes a spirit after she dies and tries to help other people.

To begin with, one of the detectives has a dream, and the 'Angel' appears, trying to give him clues but the detective is just confused about the whole thing. the next morning he gets a phone call, informing him of a murder that happened the night before that he had to check out.
the detective enters the crime scene and sees a girl who suffered a painful death due to a strange murder in her own bathroom, with the use of elixirs and syringes. This will make the audience question, why she has these weird props in her bathroom, which will add to the suspense. when the camera focuses on the girls face in the bath, a flashback takes place showing a close up of the girls face in the dream, making the detective realize that its the same person.
our film will then carry on with the two detectives around the crime scene, and trying to figure out who the murderer is.  They then find themselves being 'haunted' by the spirit in the bath, however this is just the spirit trying to contact the detectives to get the murderer behind bars. as the story goes on they get different leads to suspects which are actually not guilty get killed off, as the spirit is trying to get across that they are not the cause of her death. She gets angry with the detectives for not finding the right suspects.

We will be filming in a isolated house, with the crime scene in the bathroom. We have chose this location because its a typical thriller setting and make the audience feel on edge, especially if they watch it in their own house, because you don't expect that to happen in the safety of your own home.

CLASSIFICATION:

Our film will be classified as a 15, this will allow us to show syringes and elixirs however, they do not come in contact with the bodies therefore it will not cause any distress to the audience, and we do not encourage drug use. We will not be including any sexual scenes or acts of discrimination, which will be suitable for our target audience.